Mblansett's Characters

[mblansett]

Character Profile Sheet:
Unicorns ~


Name: Shadow Mist
Race: Unicorn
Gender: female
Companion: (if applicable) Marie
RP Color: Medium Blue

Skills & Abilities:

Personality Strengths & Weakness: Her strengths is very calm and Zen.

Relationships: Her daughter Inoku and companion Marie

Back Story:

Human Characters ~
(just give you ideal how Marie look like, this character from another role-playing game that I use to play so if anyone want to draw me and get it closer to my description please go ahead.)

Name: Marie
Age: 36
Race: human (American born)
Gender: female
Height: 4'11"
Companion: (if applicable) Shadow Mist
RP Color: Fire Brick

Physical Appearance & Apparel: Marie is 4'11" and about 120 lbs. She has sky blue eyes and ivory skin. Her hair is golden blond in summer and spring and dishwater blond in summer and fall. She wears black blue jeans and either black or navy blue t-shirt that hangs off one shoulder. Her shoes are either tennis shoes or black moccasins.

Magic Type: (if applicable) water and fire (fire is weak compare to the water magic) She start with fire and practice more on water and she not proficiency with either one (she still very new to Kalidore and still learning about her magic abilities)

Skills & Abilities: Heightened sensory sensitivities (can only tell if they are good or will do harm of some type or if someone hurting physically and is hiding it), ability feel auras (very weak: most can do is tell if someone is lying, thief, or dangerous but can't tell if they are killers or just abusers), lucid dreaming (very weak and rarely happens), changing and manipulation of said elements (only the fire part),

Personality Strengths & Weakness: Marie is a quiet, shy person. Marie speaks only when she sees that she need to. She has some speaking skills but need work since she had spent so much time alone. Marie will fight tooth and nail to protect what she love and value, thou she does sometime overreact.

Relationships: her companion Shadow Mist, Her pocket griffon Ailen, and her diki Machi

Character History - Where on earth is your companion from? Marie is from small town in the United State of American.
What era is your companion from? Marie comes from the 1980"s
What first brought her and her unicorn together? Shadow Mist was walking in the woods when she saw Marie stressing on how to get her pets to come with her, since they refused to go through the gate, thou the pets were reacting to the strange smell coming through the gate not the gate itself since no one could see the gate. Shadow Mist watched this human and was amazed to see such a strong bond with her animals and friendships between different animals that would not normally get along. Shadow Mist slowly walked up to her and could feel some kind bond type familiarity like Marie was always part of her family in Marie even though it was very week.

"You know you can't run away from your problems, and you should not bring your friends here."

Marie jumped three feet off ground and swirled in the air to land on her butt, looking at unicorn.

"I am Shadow Mist, and your are...?"

Marie blinked, "I am Marie." and thus their friendship began. Shadow Mist explained the danger of bringing her pets, so Marie shouted through the quickly closing gate to go home.

Back Story: Marie discovers the passage to isle of Kalidore exploring the woods in Missouri where her family always go to in the summer. When Marie found the passage she accidental went through the passage and fell in love with the place. She trying calling her pets to come through the gate that was closing quickly and they refuse to come, this is when Shadow Mist meets her.

[mblansett]

let me know what need fix (I know the magic part little confusing but I can send pm and maybe explain it better that way and see how you would put it, I know the ability fall under water and the fire element by what I read and understand)

[Lady Whimsy]

Two things to quickly point out - first is that Kalidore currently doesn't have many "fixed" gates at the momment - which means the Gate Marie stumbled through was a passing occurences - so like everyone else, she stumbled into Kalidore and couldn't find her way back. She wouldn't be able to keep going back and forth until a fixed gate has been established.

Also, not nessesarily a good idea for her to have come with a bunch of pets - there are A LOT of wild animals, chances are they will get eaten XD Also a pet is not really something you want to bring on a quest XD

And lastly, for the magic type, remember that by practicing both, Marie is not going to achive amuch proficiency in either. So the magic may not work as you plan it too XD Also, we give the characters thier magical boons through RP involvement, so wich element would you want her to start out with? I think some clarification in this area would be good.

Plus proof-reading for missed words and grammatical tenses will make reading your posts easier for other, too.

[mblansett]

Two things to quickly point out - first is that Kalidore currently doesn't have many "fixed" gates at the momment - which means the Gate Marie stumbled through was a passing occurences - so like everyone else, she stumbled into Kalidore and couldn't find her way back. She wouldn't be able to keep going back and forth until a fixed gate has been established.

Also, not nessesarily a good idea for her to have come with a bunch of pets - there are A LOT of wild animals, chances are they will get eaten XD Also a pet is not really something you want to bring on a quest XD

lol that why I had Shadow Mist stop her from bring her pets, but I will adjust for temperary gate

And lastly, for the magic type, remember that by practicing both, Marie is not going to achive amuch proficiency in either. So the magic may not work as you plan it too XD Also, we give the characters thier magical boons through RP involvement, so wich element would you want her to start out with? I think some clarification in this area would be good.

It fine she not proficiency in either, and since she just starting to grow and learn more about herself, ;D something just don't work out.. Let start her out with fire one since it be more weaker.

Plus proof-reading for missed words and grammatical tenses will make reading your posts easier for other, too.

sorry I thought I got them all.

[Lady Whimsy]

Looking much better Still need to do some proof-reading though, here's an example of good editing (my corrections in yellow):

[yellow]* * *[/yellow]

Shadow Mist was walking in the woods when she saw Marie stress[yellow]ing[/yellow] on how to get her pets [yellow]to come [/yellow]with her, since they refuse[yellow]d[/yellow] to go through the gate. Shadow Mist watch[yellow]ed[/yellow] this human and was amaze[yellow]d to[/yellow] see such a strong bond with her animals and [yellow]friendships between[/yellow] different animals that would not normally get along. Shadow Mist slow[yellow]ly[/yellow] walk[yellow]ed[/yellow] up to her and could feel the magic flow[yellow]ing[/yellow] in Marie even though it was very week. "You know you can't run away from your problems[yellow],[/yellow] and you should not bring your friends here."

Marie jump[yellow]ed[/yellow] three feet off ground and swirl[yellow]ed[/yellow] in the air to land on her butt[yellow],[/yellow] looking at unicorn.

"I am Shadow Mist[yellow],[/yellow] and your are.[yellow]..[/yellow]?"

Marie blink[yellow]ed[/yellow], "I am Marie." and thus their friendship began. Shadow Mist explain[yellow]ed[/yellow] the danger of bring[yellow]ing[/yellow] her pets[yellow],[/yellow] so Marie shout[yellow]ed[/yellow] through the quickly closing gate to go home.

[yellow]* * *[/yellow]

The only other note to make is that the physical appearance of a gate is very subtle - so subtle, that if you don't know what you're looking for, you'll miss it. It's a sheer slip in the fabric of time and space, not so much a "physical" thing at all. That's why most people and creatures wander into Kalidore without even realizing "they're not in Kansas anymore", so to speak ;D

Also, there's no magic in Marie for Shadow Mist to detect, at least no more then any other human has - for ALL humans have the potential. What would make more sense is Shadow Mist feeling a familiarity with Marie, since Marie is her companion. Hope that makes sense

[mblansett]

Sept 18, 2012 12:13:27 GMT -5 Lady Whimsy said:

Looking much better Still need to do some proof-reading though, here's an example of good editing (my corrections in yellow):

[yellow]* * *[/yellow]

Shadow Mist was walking in the woods when she saw Marie stress[yellow]ing[/yellow] on how to get her pets [yellow]to come [/yellow]with her, since they refuse[yellow]d[/yellow] to go through the gate. Shadow Mist watch[yellow]ed[/yellow] this human and was amaze[yellow]d to[/yellow] see such a strong bond with her animals and [yellow]friendships between[/yellow] different animals that would not normally get along. Shadow Mist slow[yellow]ly[/yellow] walk[yellow]ed[/yellow] up to her and could feel the magic flow[yellow]ing[/yellow] in Marie even though it was very week. "You know you can't run away from your problems[yellow],[/yellow] and you should not bring your friends here."

Marie jump[yellow]ed[/yellow] three feet off ground and swirl[yellow]ed[/yellow] in the air to land on her butt[yellow],[/yellow] looking at unicorn.

"I am Shadow Mist[yellow],[/yellow] and your are.[yellow]..[/yellow]?"

Marie blink[yellow]ed[/yellow], "I am Marie." and thus their friendship began. Shadow Mist explain[yellow]ed[/yellow] the danger of bring[yellow]ing[/yellow] her pets[yellow],[/yellow] so Marie shout[yellow]ed[/yellow] through the quickly closing gate to go home.

[yellow]* * *[/yellow]

The only other note to make is that the physical appearance of a gate is very subtle - so subtle, that if you don't know what you're looking for, you'll miss it. It's a sheer slip in the fabric of time and space, not so much a "physical" thing at all. That's why most people and creatures wander into Kalidore without even realizing "they're not in Kansas anymore", so to speak ;D

Also, there's no magic in Marie for Shadow Mist to detect, at least no more then any other human has - for ALL humans have the potential. What would make more sense is Shadow Mist feeling a familiarity with Marie, since Marie is her companion. Hope that makes sense

yes it does and will fix.. Now I just need a jump off point for the roleplaying.

[Lady Whimsy]

Sounds good, just keep an eye on those grammatical tenses as you go ;D When you know what you want to do & how to enter, jump on in!